Brock Hallister · Chief Visionary Officer

Send your work to Brock. He'll take it from here.

He'll print it, circle things, misread the one term that matters, and present your best idea back to you as his. Then flip one switch and get the feedback a good exec would actually give.

Parody. Brock is fictional. The useful part is real.

offline-drafts-prd.docx · printed, 4:52 AM
A real review of a sample proposal, replayed.

How it works

1

Hand it over

Paste a proposal, PRD, plan or essay. Brock is between board calls, so keep it under 15,000 characters.

2

Watch the red pen

Circles, wavy underlines, a strikethrough on your best sentence, and a P.S. where he suggests it himself.

3

Flip the switch

What this actually means turns every scribble into a sticky note with concrete, sincere feedback.

4

Share the damage

Every review gets a link and a share card. Your Vision Theft Score is yours to post.

Brock is booked solid.

Want him on your actual docs?

Everything on this site is a pre-made example. Join the waitlist and Brock will mark up your own work first when he opens his calendar.